This is a thing of beauty. You have your usual smashing dialogue between the two of them, and you have such a sweet, smart Dominic and nervous, rattled Billy. You write them so well.

"Coincidence?" It's the only answer he can come up even though he doesn't really believe it. His I'm straight speech seems to have buggered off, leaving him with only thoughts of how pretty Dominic's lips are, how nice his arm feels wrapped around Billy's shoulders.

"I'm thinking probably not. I'm thinking I could kiss you right now and you wouldn't mind so much. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that you would probably like me to do more than kiss you."

That's so real to me. I love that very calm confidence Dominic has in what he's saying and doing.

He loves the almost transcendent look on Dominic's face--the pleasure and sexual joy.

And that is gorgeous.

I can't get over how much I love how you write them, Dani. ♥