You are so good at this, everyone's a little flawed, Lily is there but not part of them, even Peter is the best at something, at chess. Sirius emotional in ways he's not ready for and flailing inside trying to figure out what to do. Them all taking care of each other, Remus healing Sirius's hand and James covering for them, that's the most satisfying part for me.

+ two typos: Dolohov’s and envelop