You don't know how happy I was to see this so fast! I liked seeing them from Lily's viewpoint. The scene in the dorm really had an intimate feeling, and I love how casually the boys treated it. (And I loved the visual of shirtless boys on the bed in the dim room.)

Also, James kissing Remus' shoulder -- !! So much love for that. The protective tendencies of both James and Sirius make me melt every time. (And Lily, apparently!)

Thank you for posting two chapters at once. I don't think I could have stood the way. Of course, now I want another one. :)