I've flailed some in email, but I have to say here too that there is nothing I do not love about this chapter. James especially was excellent in his conversation with Lily, and I love Lily observing everything in their room so carefully and yet not, and Sirius the human dare in jeans, sleepy but rock-solid there with Remus. It was all tremendously evocative. You really knocked this one out of the park. Just amazing.