Oh my god, this was excellent. Excellent and scary and possibly my new favourite of all the chapters, for what to you should be obvious reasons. :D SO COOL.
He could handle James' careless charity but was unwilling to accept it from Sirius
I love that phrase, that careless charity that could sound so bitter or so resigned, depending on Remus' mood. And the entire dialogue between Fenrir and Remus is so terrifying and good. You really went new places in your writing there, and it's really exciting to see.
"Fuck you, Remus," James said but without any power behind his words. He huffed out a breath and then grabbed Remus, pulling him in to press their foreheads together, squeezing Remus' neck before he let him go. James laughed, though there was no humor in it, and dug into his pocket for the two way mirror he shared with Sirius. "Fucking taking on werewolves by yourself. Sirius is going to kill you."
OH JAMES. *heartclench* I love when you have the two of them speaking together, and it was really fascinating to see him arrive rather than Sirius here. It really just worked for me. All of this was just fantastic. <3
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He could handle James' careless charity but was unwilling to accept it from Sirius
I love that phrase, that careless charity that could sound so bitter or so resigned, depending on Remus' mood. And the entire dialogue between Fenrir and Remus is so terrifying and good. You really went new places in your writing there, and it's really exciting to see.
"Fuck you, Remus," James said but without any power behind his words. He huffed out a breath and then grabbed Remus, pulling him in to press their foreheads together, squeezing Remus' neck before he let him go. James laughed, though there was no humor in it, and dug into his pocket for the two way mirror he shared with Sirius. "Fucking taking on werewolves by yourself. Sirius is going to kill you."
OH JAMES. *heartclench* I love when you have the two of them speaking together, and it was really fascinating to see him arrive rather than Sirius here. It really just worked for me. All of this was just fantastic. <3