The dialogue in this is so good, I was literally reading this story aloud like a script. And the tidbits! Lily in roller derby, James and his drunken memory, Peter enjoying graphic novels, Sirius reading erotica and Remus actually doing quite the same - it's brilliant. BRILLIANT~
I want to take everything you write and imprint it in my brain forever.
(And the Twilight bookmarks were a lovely touch as well, just so you know.)
SO MUCH LOVE FOR YOU RIGHT NOW you don't even know.
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Date: 2011-12-20 10:08 pm (UTC)Why is there not more of this.
The dialogue in this is so good, I was literally reading this story aloud like a script. And the tidbits! Lily in roller derby, James and his drunken memory, Peter enjoying graphic novels, Sirius reading erotica and Remus actually doing quite the same - it's brilliant. BRILLIANT~
I want to take everything you write and imprint it in my brain forever.
(And the Twilight bookmarks were a lovely touch as well, just so you know.)
SO MUCH LOVE FOR YOU RIGHT NOW you don't even know.