Oh this is everything I hoped it would be and more. Thank you so much for working so hard to write this. I love MacGonagal. I love her and I love how you always paint characters with such layers of truth and love.
(I hope you won't mind me calling attention to a couple of tense switches here and there. I imagine you switched from present to past tense at some point in your writing and missed a few spots. Check the parts where Sirius and James left the common room to see MacGonagal.)
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Date: 2010-06-10 02:18 am (UTC)(I hope you won't mind me calling attention to a couple of tense switches here and there. I imagine you switched from present to past tense at some point in your writing and missed a few spots. Check the parts where Sirius and James left the common room to see MacGonagal.)
I love this. I love you for writing it.