Weeee I loved this too. Very tense, but not an argument so articulate it couldn't belong to eleven year olds. (This, I notice, is something that happens a lot in Marauder writing - suddenly 13 year olds sound like they're 21.)
Also, interesting take on James/Remus; I don't often read of James feeling uneasy and at a mild loss around Remus, and I found it interesting. The day that didn't exist label was pretty clever, too.
Wonderful, wonderful job - I cannot wait for the next chapter. <3
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Date: 2010-05-20 10:25 pm (UTC)Also, interesting take on James/Remus; I don't often read of James feeling uneasy and at a mild loss around Remus, and I found it interesting. The day that didn't exist label was pretty clever, too.
Wonderful, wonderful job - I cannot wait for the next chapter. <3